And a poem.

[labellementeuse]

first draft, concrit adore.


I want to come around again
can't you see?
I want to return to where we used to be

I don't know where I am and
I don't know where I'm going:
all I know is
I want to come around again.

I want to hear you speak again,
I want you to hold me close
Tell me I'm the one you love the most and

(I know)I don't know what I'm saying
and I don't know what I mean:
all I know is
I want to speak to you again.

Standing in the night and
looking to the light,
I can taste the way we used to be once more:
If I could only find you
Then you know you'd find me here at your door

and though I know I want all that again
I know I won't get that again
and all I know is
I won't see you again.



Actually, looking at that, I'm pretty sure it's not a poem, it's a set of (fairly trashy) song lyrics. :p Anyone wanna write me a tune?

Comments

[miriamus.livejournal.com]

Very songy! Unfortunately I'm poo at composing. Sorry!!

[labellementeuse.livejournal.com]

*snickers* I was only joking. :D

[mandor700.livejournal.com]

Sing it to that token blues riff, like the one in "Mannish Boy", with a face melting solo after the 4th paragraph/verse/thing.

[labellementeuse.livejournal.com]

Mannish Boy????

[mandor700.livejournal.com]

yea, the muddy waters song. Its got the most token riff ever.

[labellementeuse.livejournal.com]

I don't know it. :) YSI?