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Poetry (mine)
Mar. 24th, 2004 06:59 pm( fruity )
Uhm. Also. I want to enter a poetry competition, and I kind of haven't got anything going that the moment I think is really good. or even good. Now I wrote the following this morning, and I guess I like it... but i don't know if I like it THAT much. I don't know if it's worth anything- I think it is, but... I need you all to be honest. I want/need some comments... first of all, I really liked the idea. But I don't know if it's a good one- is it trash? half of me thinks it is, a product of a couple of poems I read lately that made me laugh. But the other half isn't so negative... please help.
( dance/love/dance )
Uhm. Also. I want to enter a poetry competition, and I kind of haven't got anything going that the moment I think is really good. or even good. Now I wrote the following this morning, and I guess I like it... but i don't know if I like it THAT much. I don't know if it's worth anything- I think it is, but... I need you all to be honest. I want/need some comments... first of all, I really liked the idea. But I don't know if it's a good one- is it trash? half of me thinks it is, a product of a couple of poems I read lately that made me laugh. But the other half isn't so negative... please help.
( dance/love/dance )
