I usually kick my titles around until they add something, or at least until I think they add something. (Occasionally they add something useful like a reference to another poet.) but "collecting smiles" bores me stupid, and I like "ridiculous light" but I want to preserve the idea of smiles in the title because it gives a hint as to what connects the people in the poem, so you get the idea of all of these people smiling, even the ones I didn't mention explicitly.
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Date: 2007-05-20 06:38 pm (UTC)*sigh* so, I don't know!