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[labellementeuse]

attention due South fandom!

So, Fraser? a pretty emotional guy. I can totally imagine Fraser thinking a lot of things that I wouldn't ever imagine any other male character thinking - he can pull it off, definitely. So Fraser might indeed think, in so many words, of Ray as "the man he wanted to spend the rest of his life with."

But the thing is? Other things go with Fraser's POV, like grammar. FRASER WOULD NOT END THAT SENTENCE IN A FREAKING PROPOSITION, OKAY? "The man WITH WHOM he wanted to spend the rest of his life." (Also? Not "the man with whom he wanted to spend the rest of his life with." Criminy.) Don't end sentences with a proposition if it's Fraser thinking! Just say no!

I bet he wouldn't split infinitives, either.

Yes, I know, I'm whackadoodle but I have actually hit the back button on fics that did this. They were usually deficient in other ways too, but it was the straw.

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[china_shop]

Well, people make speech errors, inside and outside their heads. I know there's at least one place in canon where Fraser makes a speech error, though I can't remember where or what (and I wouldn't include ending a sentence in a preposition to be a speech error). Nobody's perfect.

Hey, are you back yet? Are you still interested in checking out my book discards? (Some of the feminism ones have been adopted by others, ftr.) I'm keen to get rid of them soonish, but still very happy to give you any you're interested in if you still want to take a look. :-)